This is very well written! And if my eyes don’t deceive me this is a prologue meaning we can expect more?
I’m looking forward to it! And as always
Great work wordsmith!
Skhamar, You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy. We must be cautious...
This is great stuff, a very well done first NOP fanfic, interesting story, minimal errors and well formatted.
I'll be keeping an eye out for MOAR!
I’m assuming these neutral ports/stations have a no-fire-zone like stations in the game Elite Dangerous? Where if anyone tries to fire on anything within the zone they get blown to bits?
Ah, it’s more Goodneighbour esque in this case?
Yeah, Goodneighbour is a better comparison. An independent political entity whose government is staunchly libertarian.
Also, yes, hostilities are often met with gunfire. You don't exactly have room for prisons on a station like Skhamar.
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That one old Chinese chef that runs his own shop with know staff that remembers who you are years later down the line. Ol Patrick left me in tears at one point when I was at my lowest.
This is very well written! And if my eyes don’t deceive me this is a prologue meaning we can expect more? I’m looking forward to it! And as always Great work wordsmith!
Yep, this is going to be a long story. Thanks for the feedback.
Hey, u/spacepaladin15, what's the name of the Krakotl homeworld? I've got to know. As for everyone else, I hope you like this.
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lol thanks fam. I'll add that to future chapters.
Skhamar, You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy. We must be cautious... This is great stuff, a very well done first NOP fanfic, interesting story, minimal errors and well formatted. I'll be keeping an eye out for MOAR!
lol thanks.
This is a very unique take on the verse, me likey Cant wait to see more Wordsmith
I’m assuming these neutral ports/stations have a no-fire-zone like stations in the game Elite Dangerous? Where if anyone tries to fire on anything within the zone they get blown to bits? Ah, it’s more Goodneighbour esque in this case?
Yeah, Goodneighbour is a better comparison. An independent political entity whose government is staunchly libertarian. Also, yes, hostilities are often met with gunfire. You don't exactly have room for prisons on a station like Skhamar.
Wonderful! Your characters and storytelling are excellent!
I actually really like this
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Well, I know what I am reading next.
That one old Chinese chef that runs his own shop with know staff that remembers who you are years later down the line. Ol Patrick left me in tears at one point when I was at my lowest.
Just stumbled upon your story and definitely intrigued. I'm looking forward to reading more! Great job, wordsmith!
I absolutely love this, it makes the galaxy feel very lived in :D
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