Looks very interesting wordsmith. Although I'm unsure how I'll feel if the ending is something akin to a pan out from the current setting, through an impossibly thin invisible barrier to reveal Harrow sitting in front of the terminal holding a game controller.
I am excited to read your take on the magical side of HFY. Already wondering about how mom knew he would be difficult. What kind of deal did she make and with whom? What's the reason for his sudden compatibility and interface corruption? How long were the plans in place to trick him into building a powerful core and why is it being used now? Can't wait to read the rest of this dumpster fire.
Nifty. From what I can tell, all the system stuff is just an indicator of what is happening, and not a traditional crunchy litrpg/gamelit number - heavy thing. This will be character-focused, not skill-focused.
Let's hope this is a shade less heavy than the previous series.
Yeah i cant keep track of numbers, so fuck that noise. Asfor if it'll be heavy? I plan to use my experience to make heavy *moments* hit harder, but the overall tone will be a reverse of Blacklisted i think
It isn't really clear what happened with the party sent to kill him.
I'm assuming the man who told him stuff was himself, and that perhaps that is what/who the "wrong" thing was that absorbed the dungeon's mana. However, that's not clear, and it's not clear why his body would know all that or why his body would feel so wrong to him.
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Looks very interesting wordsmith. Although I'm unsure how I'll feel if the ending is something akin to a pan out from the current setting, through an impossibly thin invisible barrier to reveal Harrow sitting in front of the terminal holding a game controller.
Completely unrelated to the 'verse, Login, but welcome back all the same!
I am excited to read your take on the magical side of HFY. Already wondering about how mom knew he would be difficult. What kind of deal did she make and with whom? What's the reason for his sudden compatibility and interface corruption? How long were the plans in place to trick him into building a powerful core and why is it being used now? Can't wait to read the rest of this dumpster fire.
Im excited to ruin expectations!
First?
Nifty. From what I can tell, all the system stuff is just an indicator of what is happening, and not a traditional crunchy litrpg/gamelit number - heavy thing. This will be character-focused, not skill-focused. Let's hope this is a shade less heavy than the previous series.
Yeah i cant keep track of numbers, so fuck that noise. Asfor if it'll be heavy? I plan to use my experience to make heavy *moments* hit harder, but the overall tone will be a reverse of Blacklisted i think
Sounds great!
I enjoyed the beginning can't wait for more
Glad you enjoyed :D
I always enjoy a good story
New WaveOfWire post YEEEAAAAHHHHH BABBYYYYYYYY. Also, do we get to pet the kobold?
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Yay! Additional cake. Happy cake day!
Ooh, look another garbage bin ... lets jump into it and see, what the destination will be ...
I am not easily impressed, but your **[STORY]**, **[SAVES]** impressed me!
Thank you kind redditor!
Ready for the story stalking and demands of more?
Wb, ranger!
EB & down. Loaded up and truckin.😁
Happy cake day! I just got here, I'm happy there is cake. :-)
I love dungeon core stories. I'm excited.
I'm excited to have an old reader back!
UTR, this is the way
Wb, better!
the reports of my death were... greatly exagerated
Hell yeah, new WaveOfWire story and one of my favorite subgenres PLUS Kobolds, awwww yesssssss!
A promising start, can't wait to see where you take it!
Hmmm interessting cant wait for moar.
Interesting one this, good job wordsmith
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It isn't really clear what happened with the party sent to kill him. I'm assuming the man who told him stuff was himself, and that perhaps that is what/who the "wrong" thing was that absorbed the dungeon's mana. However, that's not clear, and it's not clear why his body would know all that or why his body would feel so wrong to him.
Oh hell yeah, this is gonna be fun!
Slow, but fun. Hopefully
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