You do need a bit more proof reading to catch the words which spell check approves, yet aren't right. That said, I like what you shared. Hopefully you'll have more to share with us.
This is a beautiful story.
The mythology of it is approachable, easy to understand, and there's a wet humor to it.
A little editing for spelling and grammar, you'll be good to go. Again, my highest possible rating for it. Subscribed for future efforts.
Well done.
Very cool. Loved that you worked that Einstein quote in there about what ww4 will be fought with. Aliens must really not care about other species's history or why species are what they are. Cool stuff all around.
This is the first story by /u/Sigruldar!
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Me likey. Moar please
You do need a bit more proof reading to catch the words which spell check approves, yet aren't right. That said, I like what you shared. Hopefully you'll have more to share with us.
This is a beautiful story. The mythology of it is approachable, easy to understand, and there's a wet humor to it. A little editing for spelling and grammar, you'll be good to go. Again, my highest possible rating for it. Subscribed for future efforts. Well done.
Very cool. Loved that you worked that Einstein quote in there about what ww4 will be fought with. Aliens must really not care about other species's history or why species are what they are. Cool stuff all around.
Humans thrive on challenges, that's for sure!
The ending was PERFECTION Amzing
Very wholeome. I enjoyed it a lot. 😉😉
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Cool!
wow, nice. :)
!n
Loved it, feel free to spam us with more stories :)
das good shit!