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Yeah, I don't think this needs a review. It's heartfelt and it's part of a bigger process. I'm currently going through something similar. Very similar. No one has to tell you it's good or bad for it to speak to your soul and your needs. So long as it helped in the process of goodbye, that's all that matters. Good luck!


imcjf84

Wow.. That's probably one of the nicest things anyone's ever said to me. Once in awhile someone says something so small, and it's a moment that is literally remembered and thought about every single day for life. This was one of those. Thank you.


[deleted]

You're welcome. I'm so sorry you're going through this process.


imcjf84

I would still love some reviews, anyway... I just feel like maybe a tweak or two could make it flow better, sound better educated... Something. We'll see..


BlaringFeud

I feel you on the verses I'm curious if you structure it for example intro verse 1 pre-chorus chorus verse 2 pre-chorus chorus bridge chorus ending


GrimPoetry

Second line from the last, "Because your one point from perfect" Did you mean to say "Because \*you're\* one point from perfect"?