Wow, I really enjoy this.
“Try twelve”
Hahaha that got me.
I really enjoy it, it makes me feel understood and also light and easy about the insanity of trying to put everything together. I love the final line, like, a lot.
I really loved the metaphor about the glacier, it paints a picture of something spectacular that has withstood so much in its life, but life has repeatedly picked at it and starting to win.
I was just thinking on this today. Perfect way to think on complex understanding of ourselves and our histories.
Thank you! That truly means a tonne.
Wow, I really enjoy this. “Try twelve” Hahaha that got me. I really enjoy it, it makes me feel understood and also light and easy about the insanity of trying to put everything together. I love the final line, like, a lot.
Thank you so so much! This is my first poem in a while so I really appreciate the feedback.
I really loved the metaphor about the glacier, it paints a picture of something spectacular that has withstood so much in its life, but life has repeatedly picked at it and starting to win.