This is really good! I love your repeating line “i don’t believe in soulmates.” This piece is poetic but not too ambiguous which is great. I think some places the rhythm could be improved by removing a couple words, like maybe “when apart, you’re still here” instead of “you are” but that’s just a suggestion! great job!
echoing the crowd, the "I don't believe in soulmates" part is good. part of me wants it to end with that similar mid poem rhyming/cadence break with "I believe in you". May let the user relate the same potency of of the breakage. great work on this!!
This poem. It stopped me mid sip of coffee.
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This is really good! I love your repeating line “i don’t believe in soulmates.” This piece is poetic but not too ambiguous which is great. I think some places the rhythm could be improved by removing a couple words, like maybe “when apart, you’re still here” instead of “you are” but that’s just a suggestion! great job!
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This made me say "mm" like when you drink a perfect cup of coffee. I enjoy this, the content, and the nuance.
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I love this. I especially enjoyed the paradox of believing and not believing In soulmates. I also enjoyed the Rhyme pattern. Great job
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echoing the crowd, the "I don't believe in soulmates" part is good. part of me wants it to end with that similar mid poem rhyming/cadence break with "I believe in you". May let the user relate the same potency of of the breakage. great work on this!!
You mean as apposed to the last verse?