Forget the rhyming, i appreciate how this was written and I feel expression while reading it.

i love this!! i love the line “the emotional landscape of this body” it’s feels personal to me. such a beautiful and sorrowful phrase

Emotion is such a visceral reaction. And with heartbreak it's so hard to sit in the chaos that arises.

Love the title, love the context. Read it a few times.

I would like it more if it featured metre and rhyme. Rhythm and wordplay have a way of lending sparkle and coherence to what is otherwise a mere jumble of observations.

Thank you for sharing your preference for poetry styles

You are a bigger person than I for giving such a diplomatic reply...

Lol, what else was there to say honestly? It brought me some amusement that it hadn't been read properly.