You could use some of that black space next to the nutrition to maybe have a dumb little paragraph like cans of Monster, sneak your co-sponsors in that way!
"Tired of underperforming? Tired of lagging behind the competition? Grab a can of OSPUZE and let those worries melt away. Proudly sponsored by HOLTOW, insuring you while we ensure that your thirst is quenched!"
Personally I wouldn’t replace it with anything. Considering it’s wrapping around a can, a consumer wouldn’t be looking at roughly 60% of it seeing as they only need the logo and nutritional facts.
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*In a can and send it to*
*Embark, they'll love it*
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The first is most realistic to be featured nowadays when simplicity is all the rage. Even then, I still think the first is too complicated to be featured nowadays. If you’re trying to make something that would look realistic on a soda shelf, you’ll want the simplest, most barebones, “simplistic futurism” design possible
that's a good take, i've seen other people make the more simpler labels and didn't wanna do something people already did, but i def should have one just be more simpler
Below that, at the very bottom of the label, it says the ingredients are ‘carbonated water, sugar, color…’ etc.
It’s either an error or a tongue-in-cheek joke.
your confidence in my editing skills fills me with joy, i just downloaded inkscape last night and this was my first attempt but ill definitely give that a try when i can
I think it's funnier to imagine they don't show you the ingredients... because then nobody would buy it.
*but it works really well here, these look great*
Honestly people voted for what looked the coolest, not what would be good for an actual can design lol.
I tried not going over the top with my design but it didn’t really get far.
That's cool.
But I liked the Ospuze design in the game. Bright yellow can with a black logo. Clean, bold, efficient. A can like that would definitely stand out on a store shelf, unlike other manufacturers who slap a bunch of different colored elements on the design, essentially camouflaging it among dozens of the same, over-designed cans.
They’re all too busy lol, and they wouldn’t wrap around the can well. Not a fan of a logo on a logo w the egg character holding a can - your 3rd one has 3 logos on there w the small logo above the large one and the egg character lol.
Not a fan of the fake condensation.
You’re better off throwing these on a free 3d mock-up to get a sense of how they look in real life. Prob try a large logo tilted, or if you want to hero the pop pour tagline might be interesting too.
Since it’s a bit of a crazy energy drink, you could put a side spout - like when people chug a beer by puncturing the side - to emphasize the craziness of it. Could even make the O in the name the place to puncture and chug.
I think you just need to simplify it. You have like 3-4 ideas per can, just hero 1 in an elegant way and you’ll end up in a better place. Work smart not hard :)
Edit:
I just wanted to go back and say something. Its brave for you to share work with others, and potentially receive criticism for it. Don’t be discouraged, just use it to make some adjustments and improve. Even you doing this is a lot know then most would even bother trying.
Definitely slide 3
2 or 3. Not a fan of the co-sponsorship idea
i was trying to find something to put in there cause the space was a little empty, any suggestions what to replace it with?
“Free XP with special code inside for ~~modern warfare 87~~ The Finals!”
You could use some of that black space next to the nutrition to maybe have a dumb little paragraph like cans of Monster, sneak your co-sponsors in that way! "Tired of underperforming? Tired of lagging behind the competition? Grab a can of OSPUZE and let those worries melt away. Proudly sponsored by HOLTOW, insuring you while we ensure that your thirst is quenched!"
HOLY SHIT THATS PERFECT, imma have to get the font down for it to work but thanks for the input!
Happy to give input! 2 and 3 totally rock, amazing idea and solid execution so far!
Personally I wouldn’t replace it with anything. Considering it’s wrapping around a can, a consumer wouldn’t be looking at roughly 60% of it seeing as they only need the logo and nutritional facts.
For sure =)
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Agreed!
The first is most realistic to be featured nowadays when simplicity is all the rage. Even then, I still think the first is too complicated to be featured nowadays. If you’re trying to make something that would look realistic on a soda shelf, you’ll want the simplest, most barebones, “simplistic futurism” design possible
Without the water droplets, the first one is a perfect fit in the simplicity zone.
Agreed, although the “partnered with” label is pushing it a bit
that's a good take, i've seen other people make the more simpler labels and didn't wanna do something people already did, but i def should have one just be more simpler
I admire the desire to do something different, and I do appreciate the complexity and creativity of your designs
Slide 2
ALL POWER. NO SUGAR. "Ingredients - Sugar" Also POP. POUR. *PREFORM*?
aye bro i was just going with what the ospuze nutrition fact on the closed beta magnum skin😭
> PREFORM There's a typo on the first image.
thank you for catching that it was 3 am so i wouldn't be surprised if i missed more than that
> it was 3 am Ah yes, relatable.
“Ingredients - Sugar: 0g” tell me you’ve never read a label without telling me youve never read a label.
Below that, at the very bottom of the label, it says the ingredients are ‘carbonated water, sugar, color…’ etc. It’s either an error or a tongue-in-cheek joke.
WOW. as humiliation, im gonna leave my comment up, i downvoted it myself, everyone else should too, because im a fool.
This is a hilarious self-own.
YEAH I KNOW SHUT UP. IM THE IMPOSTER, AND IM THE ONE WHOS NEVER READ A LABEL
😂
i’m leaving it up, as a sticky note of shame. i’m a failure to my family 🫡
ALL POWER, NO SUGAR SECOND INGREDIENT: SUGAR
yea i thought that was stupid when making it, but it's on the closed beta skin nutrition fact on the ospuze magnum skin
“Sugar: 0g”
I like 3
2
You can press print screen to take a screenshot on GNOME.
it was 3 am when i took the pic😭my brain capacity could NOT think to do that
First
2&3
2 imo
2 or 3 feel like how they would make the bottle print
Second one ✌🏼
There’s a typo on the first one (“Preforme”). The third is the best
funny enough it came from a jpeg i found on google💀but ill try and find one that's right
You are editing.. aren’t you? Just swap it on photoshop
your confidence in my editing skills fills me with joy, i just downloaded inkscape last night and this was my first attempt but ill definitely give that a try when i can
Preform one 😔
2 or 3. Love to see the revised version with all the feedback you received from the thread. Ill keep an eye out!
this means a lot, i wanna have 4 actual cans with the revised ones next time you see them!
3
Slide 1 is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
3 is the best
All are amazing. My personal favourite is #2. Please keep this designing up guys! I love to see these posts
Carbohydrates aren't measured in milligrams so change that to just g. Fun concepts, I'd buy one if they had a finals event like an export or something
how come there are no proteins? i thought it‘s made with egg yolks
1 or 2!
I'm just wondering where those carbs are coming from, lol.
closed beta ospuze magnum skin, that's where
The two with the egg are the best imo
The second one is the best
Was this Inkscape? lmaoooo let's gooo
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I think it's funnier to imagine they don't show you the ingredients... because then nobody would buy it. *but it works really well here, these look great*
Dude let's print this on empty cans and put them into different places like bars and clubs, trash bins etc. The red bull strategy
yoooo i can def get with this movement!! down for that!
get that finals player count up just from some cans would be crazy
OP missed the OSPUZE design competition (on discord)
THE WHAT?!?? damn i gotta turn on notifications now
What? I need to check the discord more!
Honestly people voted for what looked the coolest, not what would be good for an actual can design lol. I tried not going over the top with my design but it didn’t really get far.
Looks awesome!
Probably irrelevant, but you reminded me of Napalm Energy Drink.
The second one
I don't want labels. I want to drink it.
1-3
I wanted to do this haha
The first one with those textured cans
3
2 or 3
No sugar *contains sugar*
I like 3 & 4
For the ingredients you could have just put Fresh Spuze.
1 but ad the egg
I love the second one
1
very nice
That's cool. But I liked the Ospuze design in the game. Bright yellow can with a black logo. Clean, bold, efficient. A can like that would definitely stand out on a store shelf, unlike other manufacturers who slap a bunch of different colored elements on the design, essentially camouflaging it among dozens of the same, over-designed cans.
yk what, i'll have one like that just for you sir!
The one thing bugging me is the nutrition facts say 0g sugars but the ingredients say sugar. 🙆🏻♂️
3 for sure
Reverse the Tami Tami plushie on slide 3
1 3
1 is so clean
3
Fucking great! My favourite is number three
Third captures it best I’d say
Nama Tama kinda doesn't make sense because it's the symbol of The Finals, not Ospuze, but it can be like a limited edition like some brands do ig
3rd one is insane 🔥 but all of em are heat
1-3🔥
Shouldn't that say perform....not preform
2 & 4
i like 1&2 it’s nice and subtle
They’re all too busy lol, and they wouldn’t wrap around the can well. Not a fan of a logo on a logo w the egg character holding a can - your 3rd one has 3 logos on there w the small logo above the large one and the egg character lol. Not a fan of the fake condensation. You’re better off throwing these on a free 3d mock-up to get a sense of how they look in real life. Prob try a large logo tilted, or if you want to hero the pop pour tagline might be interesting too. Since it’s a bit of a crazy energy drink, you could put a side spout - like when people chug a beer by puncturing the side - to emphasize the craziness of it. Could even make the O in the name the place to puncture and chug. I think you just need to simplify it. You have like 3-4 ideas per can, just hero 1 in an elegant way and you’ll end up in a better place. Work smart not hard :) Edit: I just wanted to go back and say something. Its brave for you to share work with others, and potentially receive criticism for it. Don’t be discouraged, just use it to make some adjustments and improve. Even you doing this is a lot know then most would even bother trying.
3 with 1s background