Looks good to me bro. From my experience, it takes a little to get comfortable with a poetry style but once you find a style you like it can be beneficial to help you process it all. Appreciate your vulnerability in sharing.

University of Missouri has a veteran poetry contest each year.

Lives not life's, but otherwise pretty good

Good old Marine spelling for ya!

I love you! Stay the course, brother and know that you are loved, no matter what 💜💜💜